looks good. For the next issue I would like to see a change in the watermarking under the text as i makes the text hard to read if you like to read the zine as close to 100% as possible. And maybe some art within the articles and less in the back. But overall a very fine first issue. If you need an article or two for the next issue send me a note.
Thanks. We'll look into your suggestions and make any appropriate changes. If you would like to write an article for the next issue send a note with the topic/title to the account and I'll let you know more.
In response to your other comment, Adobe InDesign was used for the formatting.